"The komodo dragon is the largest varanus in the world. It is robust, strong, with a broad and powerful head. The adult’s colour is a very off brown but young dragon’s colours are variable. Has a bifida language and in it is a saliba that paralysed you. It eats pigs, deer, horses and buffalo and deborado human beings".
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It looks very very ugly.Doesn't it?
thank mrs carlos i am very happy
Santi, if Nicolas is like a boar, which animal looks like you? Imagine...
Mr. Carlos,
Santi is like a bear I think
Pablo
you put "saliba" and is saliva
It is like a snake wich legs.
I don´t stand the last sentence:"... and deborado human beings".
I think that is good
mr. carlos, pablo viñeta wrote mrs but he has toput mr
mr carlos pablo put ``señora instead of``señor´´
i did it first!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
he see a mistake in ``bifda language´´. I think that is FORKED TONGUE.
JORGE
THANKS YOU, PAUL. IS A SUMMARY VERY INTERESTING.
This is a comment to Pablo viñeta. I think that the comment of pablo grande that puts "you put saliba and is saliva" I think that if you don´t know the spelling of a word, remember that you can chek it in wordreference.com. i suppost that from now you´ll chek all the words that you don´t know.
see you soon
Miguel T
Congratulations Pablo its a good reviouw, but I saw 3 mistakes:
Number 1: Not varanus, ``reptile´´.
Number 2: In the sentence ``has a bifida language´´ you forgot to put ``It´´.
Number 3: In stead or bifida, I think you had to put ``rare´´ or something like that.
P.D:Still It´s explained very well. I think it´s your first
story.
Very well done!
bifida is forked Pablo
Thank you very much to Ramón, Miguel, Nicolás, Santi and Jorge for your help to Pablo. He is very happy with your comments...
it looks dangerous but is like a gigant lizard
How many coments do you have?
I see another mistake. ``paralised´´is ``paralizarse´´´. I think that is paralyze.
thanks you
can I do a summary of the t-rex.
Ramón, it´s true that you found it first, but the idea to write it on the blog to say to mr.carlos is from me, so you only have to say
that you found it!
this' a comment to Mr.carlos:
no problem, I do it because I'm Pablo´s friend.
Of course I suppost that all the students that you put, thinks like me, and I have some mistakes in the spelling of the last comments that I publish.
this is a comment to pablo:
I think that you´ve to do more summaries ´cause you do it perfect, but there are some problems in the spelling that you have to correct
Miguel T
Jorge,
of course you can do it. Remember that is our blog, so we can publish all kind of initiatives...
Miguel,
good advice to Ramón. The idea is to learn so you can write everything you want.
Nicolas,"and devorado humans beings" is "y an deborado humanos"
,miguel T you is a waterparty
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