Here you have a new writing. It's the time of Pablo de Uribazo, who likes sea animals and specially the white shark. As always, try to find his mistakes and send a comment to help him.
"The shark is the biggest fish of the world. The sharks have hot blood and live in hot water. They hunt fish and seals. The great White shark is the most dangerous shark, it has the snout in cone form and the black eyes. The theet in arrow head instead of is name, is body didin´t White, is blue and grey. His food favourite is seals".
10 comments:
What is theet?Do you mind teeth?
PABLO your description is good but form it´s not a word the
word correct is:from.
Congratulations Pablo!!!But I found some mistakes:Theet is teeth
and didin't is didn't.Goodby
I find a mistake in the word didin't is didn't
Gonzalo,
when you want to use the sentence "Do you mind teeth?" you should use the word mean (significado, referirse a...): "Do you mean teeth?".
All the corrections are good. Also, when Santi wrote "Goodby". He forgot a letter: "Goodbye". And Alvaro, you "have found" a mistake... Remember to use the past tense.
You have a mistake the word didin´t is didn´t.by,by.
the sharkwhale is more big than
the white shark
whale
Ignacio the word form is forma
Jaime these is true but your are a wet blanket.
the white shark can participe in 5 - 10 dies on one year
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