A new summary from another student. This is the turn of Gonzalo Robles who, recently, has finished to read this incredible comic. As Gonzalo said, "I enjoyed this book because it's funny". Can you find any mistake? If it's so send a comment.
"One day in Moulinstar the captain Hadock saw throught the window a campament of gitans and then received a letter from the Castafiore. When the Castafoire went to Moulinstar Tintin and the profesor Calculus gave the welcome to the Castafoire and her secretaries, a pianist and her servant, but the Castafoire had an interview for the magazine Paris flash and she did in the house of the captain. During the interview, someone steal the jewels of the Castafiore. The Castafoire was very sad and the captain broken his leg. He bought a wheelchair to be able to go for a walk. But the magazine `Paris flash´ invetioned that the Castafoire will be married with the captain. But one day Tintín found some footsteeps on the grass of the forest and he found a nest of a magnie (urraca), he climbed the tree and he found the jewels! What an event!".
5 comments:
I saw a falt: Moulinstar.Tintin.He has put many Buts
What about the word "falt"? I think that you mean "fault", ok? Spelling.
You put in the fourth line Tintin and in the 15 you put like this Tintín you have to choose one in the next comment I will see I see you tomorrow in the school BY.
Pablo is Tintín and Erik Mounlinstar is good
I enjoyed this summary a lot,Gonzalo.It´s very good.
As Erik,i think that you wrote
a lot of times the word ``but´´
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